Still life:Arrangements and composition theme

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It’s  a still-life drawing that consists of a table and mysterious figure that is hidden underneath drapery and geometrical shapes on top of it. It took me about 15-20min to finish it.  Charcoal were used to create this drawing. I think this was a successful drawing even though it was my first time using charcoal.The follding arrangement of the drapery give this drawing individuality and curiosity. The really dark lines make the drawing look more dimensional. This drawing has more of a central composition. It looks darker than the second drawing because there was a direct light source that made shadow fall to the side that it was drawn from. 

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It’s second drawing with charcoal of still-life.

I didn't plan it properly therefore the bottom part of the drapery doesn't fully fit and the side of it doesn’t look finished.

There is a blured line next to the cone that is consequence of a failed attempt to draw the cone from the first time. 

It looks lighter then the first drawing because it was drawn under natural light which is the reason why the middle of the drawing has many dark tones and the left bottom side has a little.

All objects are arranged in a way that none of them are kissing or look orphaned.